Rude 5.1

In this post, the first paragraph is the original from the book, and the second is corrected to improve cohesion and coherence.

1. Two aims--the recovery of the American economy and the modernization of America into a military power--were in the president's mind when he assumed the office. The drop in unemployment figures and inflation, and the increase in the GNP testifies to his success in the first. But our increased involvement in international conflict without any clear set of political goals indicates less success with the second. Nevertheless, increases in the military budget and a good deal of saber rattling pleased the American voter.

When the president assumed the office, he had two aims in mind, the recovery of the American economy and the modernization of America into a military power. In regard to the first, the president succeeded in helping cause a drop in unemployment figures and inflation, and an increase in the GNP. However, the president's success with the second was lessened by increased involvement in international conflict without any clear set of political goals. Despite this, the president pleased the American voter by increasing the military budget and saber rattling.

2. The components of Abco's profitability, particularly growth in Asian markets, will be highlighted in our report to demonstrate its advantages versus competitors. Revenue returns along several dimensions--product type, end-use, distribution channels, etc.--will provide a basis for this analysis. Likely growth prospects of Abco's newest product lines will depend most on its ability in regard to the development of distribution channels in China, according to our projections. A range of innovative strategies will be needed to support the introduction of new products.

Our report will demonstrate the components of Abco's profitability, particularly growth in Asian markets as compared to competitors. This analysis was based on revenue returns along several dimensions--product type, end-use, distribution channels, etc. According to our projections, the growth prospects of Abco's newest product lines will depend most on its ability to develop distribution channels in China. Also, in order to support the introduction of new products, we will need a range of innovative strategies.