Wednesday, March 23, 2011

Williams 9.3

These sentences have been edited to add strength to the ending. The directions said to end the sentence with a nominalized adjective, but that seemed silly to me. So I tried instead to end with a concrete noun.

1. If we invest our sweat in these projects, we must avoid appearing to work only because we are only interested in ourselves.

2. The plan for political campaign was concocted by those who were not sensitive to our most critical needs.

3. Throughout history, science has made progress because dedicated scientists have ignored a hostile, uniformed public.

4. Not one tendency in our govermental system has brought about more changes in American daily life than powerful federal government agencies.

5. The day is gone when school systems' board of education have the expectation that local taxpayers will automatically go along with the extravagant decisions of incompetent bureaucrats.

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